Tuesday 3 November 2015

random Tuesday descriptive writing



There was an old rusty bath with an extremely weird handle for the water to come out the room smells like ucaliptise it does not smell very nice and the wood is rotten it is really disgusting the ground needs a really good clean with water.The cabinet where all the candles are sitting is just about going to tumble town if it does not get fixed quickly.The lights are just about broken and the passage way is coming to pieces on the inside.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Shi
    I like your Writing and my favorite part is the ending sentence. What is your Favorite thing about the sentence and why? Would you have changed anything?

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  2. Interesting writing Shialla, is there anything else about the picture you could add to this :) Mum

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